Kritic Beta Page 8

Yeah! Now I can upload the other pages of Kritic!

So this is Page 8 of Kritic and Page 1 of Kritic Beta. This page is Beta because it doesn't really contain any critiques towards anyone. Instead, Beta pages chronicles about the characters in the manga...

I don't remember in which issue was this page was published in Kreko (and I'm too lazy to dig through the big pile to find it). But this piece receive 3/5 rating (as always).

This is quite a rushed work. So the lines are messy, but still okay (I think). I think I should use more white around the "DA" sound effect in the first frame to make the sound more impressive and noticeable. I made a mistake in the third panel for not highlighting the surrounding of the sfx...

If you are wondering why is the lettering digital in this page, it's because after I finished inking without the dialogues, I made a few photocopies. Only then I put in the dialogues is the original copy and sent it to Kreko. So all I had was the photocopied version with empty speech bubbles. That's why I added the words digitally. And actually, this is the photocopy version that I scanned. So you'll have to forgive me for the crappy quality (especially those horrible white lines at the bottom of the page)...

As you can see, digital fonts are nicer. But it's a little of a hassle... Haha!